I know that some of you have already been online to see some of the pictures that Tanfield Lea uploaded from their week at Howtown. If you have not had a look at them yet click on the link below.
If you would like to leave a comment on any of the pictures, make sure that you think carefully about your writing. Make sure you write how we write in school (capital letters, full stops and no text talk like OMG and LOL).Finally, check your comments through before submitting. Comments with i (instead of I), no capital letters or full stops suggest you haven't spent time on checking your work. If you do all of the things above, your comment will be published.
Below are some sentence openers that you could use when commenting on work and/or photographs:
1. I really like where you used '......' because......
2. My favourite part was .........................
3. It would be even better if ......................
Below are some sentence openers that you could use when commenting on work and/or photographs:
1. I really like where you used '......' because......
2. My favourite part was .........................
3. It would be even better if ......................