Jonothan way better you did not sound like Beth this time
I think that you were all good because you used some good words and well done to you all
This was fun but it took me and Elisha about 4-5 attempts to get it right because we couldn't stop it and on one of them Jonathon started to talk when we got him to stop it.
What was at the beginning of Harry's. Anyway, they were all good
We are Year 6 at Brandon Primary School in County Durham. We are using this blog to extend our creative writing skills, and to demonstrate to a wider audience how fabulous we are!