Jonothan way better you did not sound like Beth this time
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samantha 6cs
2/8/2014 06:23:54 pm
I think that you were all good because you used some good words and well done to you all
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Abbie Brandon primary 6CS
2/13/2014 07:17:37 pm
This was fun but it took me and Elisha about 4-5 attempts to get it right because we couldn't stop it and on one of them Jonathon started to talk when we got him to stop it.
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Olivia
2/25/2014 02:50:33 am
What was at the beginning of Harry's. Anyway, they were all good
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