Kane
9/10/2013 06:19:20 pm
I enjoyed the story it had a good sense of pace.
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Katiec
9/10/2013 06:20:21 pm
It was exciting.
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Emily
9/10/2013 06:21:43 pm
I enjoyed reading the story.
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Oliver
9/25/2013 06:06:00 pm
I enjoyed reading the story.You could uses a different openers.
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