For homework, children were asked to write the next chapter to a comic strip prompt. The class tried hard to include interesting adjectives in their work.
The two examples are from Amber and Leah.
Yours was really good Soph. I liked the suspence and the scary parts in your one hundred word challenge. Well done for doing that many words.:)
I really like your ideas of how they run into the forest and dont stop because they're so scared.
Next time try to use more connectives to join sentences together.
I really like the way describe the monster.
Next time try use more openers.
Hi Leah yours is really good😄 excellent use of punctuation and VCOP
We are Year 6 at Brandon Primary School in County Durham. We are using this blog to extend our creative writing skills, and to demonstrate to a wider audience how fabulous we are!