For homework, children were asked to write the next chapter to a comic strip prompt. The class tried hard to include interesting adjectives in their work.
Yours was really good Soph. I liked the suspence and the scary parts in your one hundred word challenge. Well done for doing that many words.:)
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Molly P (6DC)
11/28/2013 07:44:37 pm
NO.3 Emilia
I really like your ideas of how they run into the forest and dont stop because they're so scared.
Next time try to use more connectives to join sentences together.
NO.10
Holly T
I really like the way describe the monster.
Next time try use more openers.
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Sophie M
12/4/2013 04:00:32 am
Hi Leah yours is really good😄 excellent use of punctuation and VCOP
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